Pusuasive writing (grade five)

Let us have more free time. trying to persuade Ms. W to give us more free time.

We do not have enough free time! We do so much work and we cannot relax. Everyone will work harder after we get the free time! Plus we’ll be creative if we draw during our free time.

 

People are tired and want free time! We need free time because we are tired and will learn better after relaxing. We will be creative if we are allowed to use our computer to play a game where we build things, maybe minecraft.

 

If we get free time we will learn better! If we get time to relax we will not be as lazy, and will work harder. If we work in groups afterwards, we will have more ideas to share.

 

You can make us do work! If you want us to do work, you could tell us that if we do not do the work, we will not get free time the next day. Plus we can chat with friends and we will not talk to them as much.

 

We should have more free time! Everybody is tired. Listen please.

 

Your student, Reader Girl