Author: jbennett31

Persuasive Writing

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We should have more periods of French. We have three periods of Hebrew and English we should get three periods of French. The languages are all important and we should be able to learn the most we can.  French might help you when you are older. We need more periods in French.

We have three periods of Hebrew and English we should get three periods of French. The languages are important so we need to have three periods of them. We should get to learn all of the languages we need to learn. It might stress the teacher because the other teachers have so much time but that teacher does not have a lot of time to explain homework or work. We should have the same amount of periods.

The languages are all important and we should be able to learn the most we can. All grades should have more time because it is easier to learn them when you are younger. We need to learn young so we could learn more and more over the years. What we learn now is going to help us later so we need lots of French. Languages are important so we should learn them.

French might help you when you are older. If you get a job in Canada you need to know French. Languages could help you understand so many things. Being good at languages will help you a lot. You might need French later on.

We should have more periods of French. We have three periods of Hebrew and English we should get three periods of French. The languages are all important and we should be able to learn the most we can.  French might help you when you are older. We need more periods in French. 

We have three periods of Hebrew and English we should get three periods of French. The languages are important so we need to have three periods of them. We should get to learn all of the languages we need to learn. It might stress the teacher because the other teachers have so much time but that teacher does not have a lot of time to explain homework or work. We should have the same amount of periods. 

 

 

How I made my parade float

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Problem: Can I make a parade float that can hold 100g and travel 50cm?

 

Hypothesis: I think it is going to be a challenge and I might fail but I will just keep trying.

 

Materials 

  • Bamboo skewers
  • Balls (plastic balls)
  • Cardboard pieces 
  • Paper 
  • Hot glue 
  • Tape
  • Cotton 

 

Method:

First I drew a sketch of what my parade float was going to look like. After that I took the materials .Then I started to make it. I made an X with the bamboo skewers. After  that I put two 

 

Then I hot glued it to the cardboard piece that I cut out. 

I started making the walls by cutting cardboard into squares and taping it to the base. Then I tested my float down the ramp but it didn’t work. My friends told me that it was because the wheels were only on the front and there no wheels at the back. I took their advice and added one more wheel on the bamboo skewer. I tried it again and it worked better but it still didn’t go 50cm. I cut the bamboo skewers so cut two tiny pieces of bamboo skewers and attached two more wheels near the front of the parade float. I thought since the weight was shared equally it would work better. My float worked and passed the test of going 50cm and traveling 55cm. But then Mrs. Bennett said that you need to add some decoration so I cut out Megan Davids that I drew on paper and glued them to the sides of the float. I also put cotton inside the float. It also held 100g.